It's Off (or done, or whatever)!

Okay, this time more or less for sure. Firestar appears to be done and is off for commentary. The problem was the last two chapters.

You have to have the protagonist solve the problem. In this case it was two-fold, though only one was stated obviously: learn how to beat the Idenux; overcome the arthritis that cripples the Families Navy. Corey does so. And is sent to the next problem, beating the people behind the Idenux.

With that (temporarily) off my back, I turn to rewriting the synopsis and sending it to the agent.

And I am going back to revisit my earlier uncompleted story about Jen the Dryad.

Too bad Real Life is getting in the way of things.