Update to the previous post -
I mentioned that I'd finished Three Valleys - Sammi a second time. This wasn't confusion. I wasn't satisfied with the last chapter, and I rewrote it completely. There were a number of reasons for that.
In the original version, posted at Storiesonline, Sammi was working in a small town below the falls. That was in the 'no-clothing' zone, so she stripped, and we end with her in a town that combines the nudity of Seaside with the frequent sex of Three Valleys, especially among the schoolage kids. For a number of reasons, that was an adequate ending.
In the rewritten version Sammi is a teacher at a new town in a new valley, making this 'Four Valleys' rather than Three. No public/constant nudity; same clothing rules as in Three Valleys: while swimming, and casual nudity while changing and so on is accepted (but clothes are the norm). She has her regular classes (English); she teaches beginning Sex Ed to some girls who are just coming of age, and Sex Ed to some older students, too. Her friend Jeannette, who is pregnant, is there, too as the P.E. teacher. I add more detail and more description.
When I put the whole thing together, that's the version to end the story with.
Friday, July 27, 2007
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